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An echo fades into the night,
an eerie mournful sound.
A shooting star disappears from sight,
and I crumble to the ground.
There is no life within this garden,
my sobs are the only sound.
I have poisoned the honeyed fountain
where your love could be found.

Dazed, I stare at the stars above,
my grieving howls fill the night!
Unintended betrayal of love
has hidden you from my sight.
I remember how it used to be
when we shared our fears and delights.
You are a treasured friend to me.
How can I make things right?

Feeling afraid, cold and lonely,
I long to tell you how I feel,
but you don’t want to hear me.
The pain for you is much too real.
Should I back away and build a wall
and block away how I feel?
Or, should I give you a call?
We both need some time to heal.

An echo fades into the night
as our friendship disappears.
How do I know what is right?
How can I ease my fears?
If I do write  you again,
would the old wounds reappear?
I can’t stand to cause you pain.
Hurting you again is my worst fear!
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I have been betrayed once again, but what else can I expect?
I have yet to earn the gift of human respect.
I wish someone would please tell me the truth for once.
:(

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:iconpunkdancer:
Neat poem. Exactly how I feel today. :tears:

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:iconfjcruz:
awww heart broken? what happened?
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:iconracocooper:
I'm sorry that you feel this way. I don't even know what happened...

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Johns: How's it look?
Riddick: Looks clear.
[Johns steps forward, and a creature flies out towards them. They duck it ]
Johns: You said it was clear!
Riddick: I said it *looked* clear.
Johns: Well, how does it look now?
Riddick: Looks clear.
:iconracocooper:
Just read the other post, never mind...

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Johns: How's it look?
Riddick: Looks clear.
[Johns steps forward, and a creature flies out towards them. They duck it ]
Johns: You said it was clear!
Riddick: I said it *looked* clear.
Johns: Well, how does it look now?
Riddick: Looks clear.
:iconhardyluver:
I forgive you not entirely ur fault

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*~I'm in love!~*
:iconhardyluver:
Read studentofdusts last lournal entry but remember it's not his fault

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*~I'm in love!~*
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